Reflective Writing

Dear Students,

After reviewing the peer assessment feedback and video recording of your presentation, write a paragraph highlighting what you think you did and didn't do well. What areas would you like to improve on for your next presentation?

Cheers

Mystery Object

Hi Guys,

Describe a mystery object on the blog using descriptive sentences and sense details. Then see if you can guess what the other students' objects are.

Enjoy!

Mr Lee

Vocabulary Helper

Hi Guys,

These are the links for the online dictionary and thesaurus that I mentioned in class. I am sure they will be useful for expanding your vocabulary.

http://thesaurus.com/

http://nhd.heinle.com/Home.aspx

Summary Writing Practice

Hi Guys,

Using the summary writing guidelines in my previous post, write a summary of the paragraph entitled "A Hawaiian Wedding" on page 38 - 39 of the coursebook.

Please submit your summary as a comment on this post by Monday, October 17, 2011.

Begin your summary like this: In the paragraph entitled "A Hawaiian Wedding", the author states that ...

Happy blogging!

Mr Lee

Summary Writing Guidelines

Dear Students,

Please refer to the following guidelines for effective summary writing. You may also find the link below useful.

http://unit.xjtu.edu.cn/yyb/jpkc/data/jxms/86/1pyq/second_xiezuo_p/Chapter%205%20Summary%20Writing/Summary%20Writing.ppt

1. Read the article. Re-read the article. Underline important ideas and circle key terms. Find the main point of the article. Divide the article into sections or stages of thought, and label each section or stage of thought in the margins.
2. Write brief summaries of each stage of thought. Use a separate piece of paper for this step. This should be a brief outline of the article. 
3. Write the main point of the article in your own words. This should be a sentence that expresses the central idea of the article.
4. Write your rough draft of the summary.

NOTE: Include all the important ideas.

1. Use the author's key words.
2. Follow the original organization where possible. 
3. Include any important details. 
4. Include any important conclusions.

In the summary, you should include only the information your readers need.

1. State the main point first.
2. Use a simpler language than the author of the original article uses. 
3. Do not write a summary your readers cannot understand.
4. Make the summary clear and understandable to someone who has not read the original article.
5. Your summary should stand on its own.
6. Add no new data and none of your own ideas.

Unless the examples in the article are essential, do not include the examples in your summary. If you include them, remember to explain them.

Here is an easy way to begin a summary: In "[name of article]" [author] states . . . . [State the main point of the article first.] For example: In "Computer Chess"* Hans Berliner states that the CYBER 170 series computer can perform well in a chess tournament.

So when you write a summary:

1. State the main point first.
2. Emphasize the main stages of though. 
3. Paraphrase whenever possible.
4. State the article’s conclusion. 
5. Keep the summary short: 3 to 7 sentences is great.

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Paragraph: A Person Who Has Made a Difference

Make revisions to your paragraph using the feedback gained from the peer assessment activity completed in class. Then post the second draft of your paragraph on the blog.

Hello Guys...Hello Mr.Lee

Hello Guys...Hello Mr.Lee

This is my first post on BINUSIAN 2015 PreAceng Blog

I hope this blog can be interest, helpful and give innovation for who visit and read this blog.

Cheer J

First,let me introduce my self...

My name is Muhammad Rasyid you can call me Rasyid or Ochid(my cute name)

but no Ra-Shit!! yaa !! 

            I was born in Cirebon March 15 1994 firstly I named “Muhammad Abdul Rasyid Ridho Sutrisno Ahmad Al-Amin”. That name came from my father and my grandfather. But my mom suggest is not to use long name,just “Muhammad Rasyid” it's better and have a good meaning,that is "Muhammad who show the right way of life"

            In daily life i'm just look like an ordinary boy who want to reach my dream. I’m only college student who wants to be a successful in the future with background to make my parents happy. I will do the best for everything I do.

            I have Have one father, one mother, and one sister. I’m the oldest son in my family. Even I’m the oldest grandson in my big family, so I have to be a successful person in the future as a good figure for my younger cousin.

            My hobbies are Reading, Playing Guitar, also singing, writing on blog, and write a song. In fact a have 2 blogs now, but I rarely post on my blog hehehe. Because too many assignment from lecturer, so I have no time to sit in front of my laptop for a long time.

Sorry I have to end this post, there is another activity must I do. Another time I’ll post again on this blog. Bye…J