Dear Students,
After reviewing the peer assessment feedback and video recording of your presentation, write a paragraph highlighting what you think you did and didn't do well. What areas would you like to improve on for your next presentation?
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ReplyDeleteMercythee and me did the presentation about suites in the most luxury hotel in the world. Me and Mercythee put a song sounds like arab song, we thought its good for our presentation, but made our presentation not too good indeed. Because the sound is too high, so we should to higher our voice. In addition, our presentation is too detail, we put all of the information in our presentation, so no one could ask.
ReplyDeleteAnd for myself, I have lack of eye-contact, and very nervous, because of nervous, I laughted, and its make me not serious and forget what I need to say.
That's all about my last presentation, for the next, I would to check the song (if I put a song), more serious, and have eye-contact with the audience.
According to my group performance on last presentation there are several weaknesses i realize and i am working on it:
ReplyDelete1.weak at introduction, we do not really could make the audience interested to what we are going to explain on the presentation
2.weak at outlining, we do not manage the outline nicely and the presentation is went bored
3.weak at attitude, because my group is not clear about the material so they have to stay focus on the slides which is poor eyes contact with the audience
4.weak at intonation, the intonation quite bad because the group do not clear about the material so they have to read the slides
But, we are good at:
1.Explaining the object, we did explain the object clearly so the audience know each function of the part of the object
2.Answering Questions, we did answer the question clearly in detail so the audience satisfied and do not have too much question so far